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BUTT SEX!!!

As a warning, I am brutal with help on art. Like... you may hate me for whatever I say, but since I do nothing but draw all the time and aspire to do it as a career, essentially, I have to learn to point out the same things that I would get yelled at for.

I should really be mentioning this ON the deviation, but here, since you asked through comments:

Downfalls of the Edward Elric:
- Too frantic of a background. You rushed it, rather than taking time like on Ed himself when coloring. There are many traditional ways to color the background and have it look cool.
- I personally think he'd have been cooler with the metal arm, but that's up to you.
- Seems kinda tall, something Ed is not.
- Too skinny. Ed has muscle. While you don't need to show them in particular, the body should be a little more full (arms/legs too).

It's only depressing because it looks like you can clearly draw a decent Edward, but you more or less drew a skinny emo boy and stuck Ed's head on it. =(

n_n; Sorry if I totally offended you with that.

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"Context sensitive. It's sensitive... to context..." - Mr. Scarecrow 'Birdy'
:iconlovelytom-pistol2d:
haha no it's okay...that's what i asked for...i needed your opinion to make it better.....

and...

lmao, i was originally drawing an emo (not sterotypical but wateva) boy, and then i was watchin an fma episdoe too so i was like

"what the hell, Ed would look hot"

so yeah

=]

i do need to draw an original edward now...damn

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lol

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"You can leave now and beat the traffic! Or you could stick around and beat your meat..." - Mark Hoppus

"Context sensitive. It's sensitive... to context..." - Mr. Scarecrow 'Birdy'
:iconlovelytom-pistol2d:
haha?

funny?

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Welcome to the DA! ^_^

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:iconlovelytom-pistol2d:
hah thank you

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